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[cicer]

My youkai!Hakkai fic is about halfway done, but as may be evidenced by my whining posts over the last few days, it's not going too well. I'm left with the feeling that the fic is really dragging in some places and not fleshed out enough in others. Plus, the fic is set in an odd time in canon, and I'm concerned I may be screwing up the timeline. So I would really love another pair of eyes to look the fic over and tell me what makes sense, what doesn't, which parts to cut, and so on. Anyone interested? It would really be a huge help.

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[cicer.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :) I will send it shortly.