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[cicer]

My youkai!Hakkai fic is about halfway done, but as may be evidenced by my whining posts over the last few days, it's not going too well. I'm left with the feeling that the fic is really dragging in some places and not fleshed out enough in others. Plus, the fic is set in an odd time in canon, and I'm concerned I may be screwing up the timeline. So I would really love another pair of eyes to look the fic over and tell me what makes sense, what doesn't, which parts to cut, and so on. Anyone interested? It would really be a huge help.

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[lisa-bee.livejournal.com]

I'd be happy to cast an eye over it. I can't guarantee I'll catch every canon-timeline quirk, but I'd be happy to look over it as Saiyuki-in-character and as plot-pacing-etc. My email is lisa underscore bee at livejournal dot com.

Oh, and enclose a note telling me how harsh I can be: I tend to be a, mmm, enthusiastic commenter, and I'm not always terribly tactful.

[cicer.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :) I will send it shortly.